01 October 2009

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i climbed up the mountains so tall and high
my heart thundered, and i wanted to try
i was deep into the dreams...that
i would never wake up until i fly ......

my thoughts were shattered and broken
it was the thunderous sounds of the rain.....
i sat on my couch looking through the window...
what the drizzle had in it, took away my pain .....

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i always imagine myself to be in situations when m struck very bad ... and somehow rain comes and heals the situation .... i dunno y i feel like this .... but may be cuz i love rains more than anything ....

happy new month ... to all the fella bloggers ...

17 comments:

Guria said...

Great poem! I could feel every bit of this! Really liked that. Even I love the rains so much. Happy new month to you too! :)

Vishnu said...

hmmm.. confused..

pra said...

Nice poem. I actually think rain as little gloomy. Sometimes don't like it! But your perspective is very good. the pic is good as well.
Thanks for visiting and following my blog.

SiMbA tAgO said...

@ guria : : thanks guria .... thanks for the motivation .. and yeah rains are jus an awesome thing that can happen to us.... happy new month ,....

@ vishnu : : wt's so confusing machi ??

@pra : : hey dear .. welcome to my blog.. its ur first here..and m glad that it has been great one for me ....rains are jus sth that makes me feel so energetic..and lively... and drenching in rain.. is like heavenly for me ... take care.. and visit again ... most welcome

S... said...

Ooo...i love rains n wish it rains here a li'l..n nice poem
:) happy new month..

SiMbA tAgO said...

hey S : : welcome to this blog ... free to comment and post ... without hesitation .... n as per rains are concerned.. i think most of us love it too ....

same to u .. have a happy month

SG said...

Nice poem. Reminded me of the song: Rain drops keep falling on my shoulders.

Guria said...

Hey, you have a tag or two over at MM, check 'em out, and do them if you want. :)

SiMbA tAgO said...

thanks SG .. thanks for the comment ... yeah a really ncie song indeed ...



@ GURIA : :m sure i'll take up these tags and do them very soon .... sure sure ... jus gimme some tiem .... and thanks for these tags

vaishu said...

hey really nice poems, and I know it is very comforting when you are in your worst possible mood... and the rain comes pouring and everything that you were feeling so far vanishes... I have experienced it... and it was lovely :)

DiDo said...

First time here...completely impressed..!! superb poem :)

Rohini Prasanth said...

"I would never wake up until I fly"

such a beautiful line..It conveys a deep inner meaning.. wonderfully written simba..

Did I ever tell you Simba is my favorite toon character. I love that movie so much. Might I ask abut your name Simba tago?

SG said...

Congratulations. You have been given an award and tagged. Please collect it from my blog. Thanks.

SiMbA tAgO said...

@ vaishu : : thanks vaishu...n yeah as u say, its very true that at times rains are so much comforting wen v r not in a good mood.... and it comes down making us feel better... its lovely...

@DIDO : : welome to this blog dido....and thanks for the comments...keep coming frequently and keep enjoying... m happy ur impressed ... :P

@rohini : : thanks rohini .... the story of SiMbA tAgO from my childhood i always wanted to have such a tag-name for me .... so that i can use it everywere... and i hardly watch cartoons.. but this lion Simba had impressed me ... and then i took it from him ...

so u might be knowing since SiMbA is the king of the forest... io jus used it..thinking that it motivates me to keep scorching ahead... and tago was jus to add for the completeness and some originality in it... :P

@ SG : : hey dear thanks a lot for the award .. wil be doing the honours very soon....

Shalini said...

good one!!!
rain does heal....i agree with you on that.

Samadrita said...

Hey beautifully expressed.The rains seem to have different kind of effects on different people. :)
Anyway you're tagged in my new post.Be sure to read it!

SiMbA tAgO said...

@ shalini : : thanks for hetting the core of the poem and trying to understand what i wrote... m seriously feeling great that ppl are able to understand what m trying to blah blah .. tahnkas al..

@ samad : :thanks samad.. its ur encouragement that keps me ticking .. thanks ... surely will check it ut dear ....

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